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Asura Cryin 2 Finished.
TwEeD:
Your misunderstanding me ... i'm in a hurry now so going to make it short:
Yes the plot advances, no it doesn't have to give up everything in the first episodes... it's just the way it's presented that is badly done, it's filled of clichés, bad character building and superficial storytelling. The series could be so good but it's getting ruined by this. I'm no writer but I do expect better storytelling from scenario-writers.
Havoc10K:
so what would you do ?
TwEeD:
--- Quote from: Havoc10K on October 09, 2009, 12:32:41 PM ---so what would you do ?
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--- Quote from: TwEeD on October 09, 2009, 12:29:49 PM ---I'm no writer but I do expect better storytelling from scenario-writers.
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That's like sayin' "so how would you cook it?" when your at a restaurant and found the dish you got subpar
Havoc10K:
l'm just asking what you want to see now in the series, to me it goes smoothly the way it should for now, if youre expecting something just say what should the ymake us see instead of saying, yo uexpect something else, it's like watching dragonball and youre expecting to see toradora, you didn't point anything wrong with teh series, and thats my question, what do you thing is goind the bad way being presented in teh show ?
to clarify :
you all claim this plot is badly shown, but you have no idea how to improve it, if you do, explain, otherwise enjoy the show teh way it is.
you guys are like a kid about this show, yo uwanna eat a cake, but you have no idea what type, and anything presented to you will be bad.
TwEeD:
--- Quote from: Havoc10K on October 09, 2009, 01:21:07 PM ---l'm just asking what you want to see now in the series, to me it goes smoothly the way it should for now, if youre expecting something just say what should the ymake us see instead of saying, yo uexpect something else, it's like watching dragonball and youre expecting to see toradora, you didn't point anything wrong with teh series, and thats my question, what do you thing is goind the bad way being presented in teh show ?
to clarify :
you all claim this plot is badly shown, but you have no idea how to improve it, if you do, explain, otherwise enjoy the show teh way it is.
you guys are like a kid about this show, yo uwanna eat a cake, but you have no idea what type, and anything presented to you will be bad.
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Not at all
An applecake is presented to me, I like applecakes so i'm eating it ... but the applecake misses something, it's dry and not quite flavorfull while it actually looked quite good. What you are saying is that I can't criticize this applecake because I can't say "it should have been baked at less higher degree", "the apples used aren't flavorfull", "the flour used is what makes it dry". I can't bake applecakes (actualy I can but that's not the point ;) ) but I do eat them so why can't I say the applecake isn't good?
No offense but don't you see the flaw in your logic?
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