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Offline Misery

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Drawing of Miku.
« on: December 18, 2009, 10:28:04 PM »
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Offline Carnivus

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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #1 on: December 18, 2009, 10:57:01 PM »
Isn't the hair supposed to be over the eyes/eyebrows?
Aside from that flaw,I do not see a thing to be wrong.It's pretty good,I like it.I will surely follow up your work.You do seem on the right way,if there is such a way.Good luck ahead.
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Offline Duki3003

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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #2 on: December 18, 2009, 11:15:51 PM »
Shouldn't the arms be partially visible?
Edit: Just an idea, give it Phaedris for the Anime Coloring game challenge...
« Last Edit: December 18, 2009, 11:19:23 PM by Duki3003 »
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Offline Misery

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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #3 on: December 19, 2009, 12:30:54 AM »
Oh, uh, I still haven't drawn the arms yet. :x

As for Phaedris, after I finish coloring it myself, I'll send him the lineart and see what he does with it.
I'm always open to new styles.
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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #4 on: December 19, 2009, 12:38:06 AM »
You will redraw the torso and the arm partitions, right? At the moment the head looks proportionally too big imo. But keep up the work!!!
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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #5 on: December 19, 2009, 01:20:27 AM »
Quote from: newy on December 19, 2009, 12:38:06 AM
You will redraw the torso and the arm partitions, right? At the moment the head looks proportionally too big imo. But keep up the work!!!
I agree, the head's a bit too big. It's the size of her entire chest. Also, the line that's meant to represent the separation of her breasts (if that's what it is) looks like it's a little misaligned. Maybe it's just me, but it kind of looks like most of the stuff in her chest area is rotated like it's trying to face the camera (especially that ribbon), but her breasts are facing off in another direction or something. I'm no pro at judging art, so take it with a grain of salt, I'm just calling it like I see it. Maybe you can fix that up with some shading and stuff, if there is a problem. The whole chest area just looks a bit awkward to me.

Oh and... she kinda looks like she's about to cry (but not out of total despair). Are you going for a "Mio getting teased"-ish look? >.>
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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2009, 02:06:39 AM »
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Offline Misery

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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #7 on: December 19, 2009, 04:17:16 AM »
I'd rather not have to redraw the whole torso... ;_;

As for the breasts-separator line, I already noticed that, and it's already been fixed; I just didn't want to make a whole 'nother update just to show that. Thanks for pointing it out, though! Big help. :3

Finishing up the sketch soon, and then going to apply color.
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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #8 on: December 19, 2009, 04:41:52 AM »
Having your reference picture would help us to make fun of your drawing. analyze your drawing better.

Looking forward to the final result.  :)
« Last Edit: December 19, 2009, 04:44:25 AM by cubensis55 »
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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #9 on: December 19, 2009, 05:00:36 AM »
Quote from: Carnivus on December 18, 2009, 10:57:01 PM
Isn't the hair supposed to be over the eyes/eyebrows?
It seems to be an accepted thing in anime to have the eyebrows visible over hair.  I'm surprised you haven't noticed it yet.
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Offline Misery

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Re: Drawing of Miku.
« Reply #10 on: December 19, 2009, 06:41:53 AM »
Quote from: cubensis55 on December 19, 2009, 04:41:52 AM
Having your reference picture would help us to make fun of your drawing. analyze your drawing better.

Looking forward to the final result.  :)

I smiled.
Nah, no actual reference picture. I couldn't find an actual picture of Miku in an outfit like that, so just based it off of various maid outfits that I'd seen around.

Oh, and the hair ribbons were stolen from Haruhi. :x


Edit: Fixed some errors, started my coloring.
I know there are some flaws and things, as well as some black-lineart still showing on the head, but all that will be ironed out later.
« Last Edit: December 20, 2009, 10:04:18 PM by Misery »
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