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Drawing of Miku.

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xShadow:

--- Quote from: newy on December 19, 2009, 12:38:06 AM ---You will redraw the torso and the arm partitions, right? At the moment the head looks proportionally too big imo. But keep up the work!!!

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I agree, the head's a bit too big. It's the size of her entire chest. Also, the line that's meant to represent the separation of her breasts (if that's what it is) looks like it's a little misaligned. Maybe it's just me, but it kind of looks like most of the stuff in her chest area is rotated like it's trying to face the camera (especially that ribbon), but her breasts are facing off in another direction or something. I'm no pro at judging art, so take it with a grain of salt, I'm just calling it like I see it. Maybe you can fix that up with some shading and stuff, if there is a problem. The whole chest area just looks a bit awkward to me.

Oh and... she kinda looks like she's about to cry (but not out of total despair). Are you going for a "Mio getting teased"-ish look? >.>

vuzedome:
(click to show/hide)Head too big!
Head too big!
Head too big!
Seriously.

Misery:
I'd rather not have to redraw the whole torso... ;_;

As for the breasts-separator line, I already noticed that, and it's already been fixed; I just didn't want to make a whole 'nother update just to show that. Thanks for pointing it out, though! Big help. :3

Finishing up the sketch soon, and then going to apply color.

cubensis55:
Having your reference picture would help us to make fun of your drawing. analyze your drawing better.

Looking forward to the final result.  :)

Xiong Chiamiov:

--- Quote from: Carnivus on December 18, 2009, 10:57:01 PM ---Isn't the hair supposed to be over the eyes/eyebrows?

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It seems to be an accepted thing in anime to have the eyebrows visible over hair.  I'm surprised you haven't noticed it yet.

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