I would like some critism and advice for some guide videos (FF13)

[Jesta23]

Im not sure how many of you intended on getting all of the trophies for FF13, but you need tons of Gil to do so. So as I was doing it I wrote a FAQ/Guide on the various Gil farming methods I have found and posted It on gamefaqs. Since then I have gotten about 10-20k hits a day on it, and I wanted to add some videos to cut down on the amount of questions I get emailed everyday.

I am not the best speaker in the world, and so I would like some suggestions on the commentary for the videos.
Here are the two I have finished so far.
Note: they may be still processing so the quality is somewhat bad right now.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zuCjxj3aNp4
and
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MGFJCIObXEo

[Nikran]

Many thanks for going to the trouble to write such faqs. I'd go and read through them right now but only had the game for less then a week (At Gran Pulse atm). I'll probably refering to them once i kill the final boss =P

[mgz]

my only suggestion would be to write down a script so your not verbally stuttering at times, and you can allow yourself to sound more fluent and knowledgeable.

and maybe go a little on how to get to the areas your showing on the assumption that complete fuck tards are going to be looking it up but this one i feel is less important then the one above

[Spanks]

Great videos, will use those ideas when i do my 100% run through. Maybe shorten he first one and add directions but other then that they are great.

[Cavanboy18]

No offense but any 1 who play's Rpg's and or loves them like i do... thats pretty much every game i own... skipped ff13 lol. its dumb downed rpg. Even square said so them selves's to have a "more western appeal" so yea if you got a ps3 Get disgaea 3

[Enzedder]

And he wants criticism on the FAQs not on how bad or good you think the game is so how about searching and posting in the actual FF13 game thread and leave this one alone if all you are going to do is fill it with your opinions on how much the game sucks.

Back on topic though.

Very informative and a nice clear run down. Very nice.