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Story project anyone?
harpy:
--- Quote from: fohfoh on May 15, 2010, 08:01:16 AM ---Awesome. Thanks for those additions Harpy.
Also, a question. Who would make the best narrator for the story? I tried Jennifer, but it seems like she's too young. Unless I up her age a little bit...
Any ideas on that one? (I have about a few pages written already, but I'm finding it's a lot of explaining. So I'm editing that part for now.
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Cant you have and independent narrator? Not one of characters.
But if you want to stay with Jennifer you can always make her remember stuff from childhood while living in a now ;)
fohfoh:
--- Quote from: harpy on May 18, 2010, 06:20:49 AM ---
--- Quote from: fohfoh on May 15, 2010, 08:01:16 AM ---Awesome. Thanks for those additions Harpy.
Also, a question. Who would make the best narrator for the story? I tried Jennifer, but it seems like she's too young. Unless I up her age a little bit...
Any ideas on that one? (I have about a few pages written already, but I'm finding it's a lot of explaining. So I'm editing that part for now.
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Cant you have and independent narrator? Not one of characters.
But if you want to stay with Jennifer you can always make her remember stuff from childhood while living in a now ;)
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Hmm... that's a good idea too. I really don't know why I want to go on about a background about a kid... xD
* fohfoh shoos away the loli lovers
Chop that off, and now back to the drawing board. :P
wolkec:
why are they all japanese? And why do you say that you are going back to the drawing board when you're actually writing and not drawing...
harpy:
--- Quote from: fohfoh on May 18, 2010, 10:19:02 AM ---
--- Quote from: harpy on May 18, 2010, 06:20:49 AM ---
--- Quote from: fohfoh on May 15, 2010, 08:01:16 AM ---Awesome. Thanks for those additions Harpy.
Also, a question. Who would make the best narrator for the story? I tried Jennifer, but it seems like she's too young. Unless I up her age a little bit...
Any ideas on that one? (I have about a few pages written already, but I'm finding it's a lot of explaining. So I'm editing that part for now.
--- End quote ---
Cant you have and independent narrator? Not one of characters.
But if you want to stay with Jennifer you can always make her remember stuff from childhood while living in a now ;)
--- End quote ---
Hmm... that's a good idea too. I really don't know why I want to go on about a background about a kid... xD
* fohfoh shoos away the loli lovers
Chop that off, and now back to the drawing board. :P
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well she might not be kid any more, but rememmber being a kind, she can be now one of grown up womans :P the atleth or the grandmother.... or she can be all the female characters you have there... ( harpy like screwed up stories...sorry)
--- Quote from: wolkec on May 18, 2010, 01:09:53 PM ---why are they all japanese? And why do you say that you are going back to the drawing board when you're actually writing and not drawing...
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cant you read? they are not all japanese.....
Roven:
dunno...I kinda think that som1 who is almost not related to the events of the story would be good narrator or one of them....it doesn't have to be just one..
A homeless guy came to my mind for some reason, maybe a freelance reporter?
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