Angel Beats Swedish Subtitles project

[godofcheese]

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I don't watch Angel Beats, so I have no idea how accurate the translation is. The main problem with that line, however, is that you're using the wrong adverb.

"Vart ska vi börja?" is not a valid Swedish sentence; it should read "Var ska vi börja?" Keep in mind that we differentiate between var (befintlighet) and vart (rörelse). The latter is only used when some form of motion is implied. If you, for some reason, are unsure of which to use, you can always check whether the question can be answered using här and där or hit and dit; if the former two work, then you should use var. If the latter two work, then you should use vart. Let's look at the line in question:

"Vart ska vi börja?"
"Dit."

That doesn't work at all.

"Var ska vi börja?"
"Där."

That works just fine.

"Vart ska vi börja?"
"Dit."
Swedish now""
Hade jag verkligen skrivit "Dit?"
aja.. nånting som jag har glömt att fixat då.. drygt.
men sånna här saker blir helt konstigt i huvudet när man försöker översätta

Men tack att du påpekar sånna saker ^^

No, you didn't write that. I used it as an example to show you why "Vart ska vi börja?" is ungrammatical. I'm assuming that the original line was something along the lines of "Where should we begin?"

"Where is the station?" -> "Var ligger stationen?" (Befitlighet)
"Where are you going?" -> "Vart ska du åka?" (Rörelse)

Do you see the difference?

Oh ok, i understand now.
this is why i wanted "feedback" etc, because i knew i would miss out on stuff like this.
But i will look through the .ass again, to correct all ungrammatical words, sentences.

[stream]

I didn't watch the whole thing, but really did you watch any of it yourself after completing the sub?

[godofcheese]

I didn't watch the whole thing, but really did you watch any of it yourself after completing the sub?

well yeah i watched it several times, and i have checked the .ass now and corrected all the grammatical errors.
will swap the video soon with the new one.

[stream]

Well tbh, it was too easy to find errors in it, and I'm not saying that to be rude.

[godofcheese]

Well tbh, it was too easy to find errors in it, and I'm not saying that to be rude.

Well i found lots of errors... got ofc embarrassed... can send you the .ass file later.. if you want to check the grammar

you'll need Aegisub to see it. very simple program, will send it to you after school if you want to

[stream]

Sure let's do it later, I'm in school too.

[Path]

Out of curiosity, whose subs did you use for the translation?

[godofcheese]

Out of curiosity, whose subs did you use for the translation?

Hm.. It was Himatsubushi, and Static-Subs, if i'm correct.
Combined them alittle to make it "better"..

[hilander72]

Well tbh, it was too easy to find errors in it, and I'm not saying that to be rude.

Well i found lots of errors... got ofc embarrassed... can send you the .ass file later.. if you want to check the grammar

you'll need Aegisub to see it. very simple program, will send it to you after school if you want to

Exportera till text fil och göra en snabb första kontroll i en ordbehandlare skadar aldrig.

[stream]

Well tbh, it was too easy to find errors in it, and I'm not saying that to be rude.

Well i found lots of errors... got ofc embarrassed... can send you the .ass file later.. if you want to check the grammar

you'll need Aegisub to see it. very simple program, will send it to you after school if you want to

Exportera till text fil och göra en snabb första kontroll i en ordbehandlare skadar aldrig.

That will be my job later on.

[Akecu]

I shall contribute by watching your subbed episode and also train my sweden.
Can't help since my sweden is awful (8 in school grades)

Regards from Finland,
Akecu : P

[godofcheese]

I shall contribute by watching your subbed episode and also train my sweden.
Can't help since my sweden is awful (8 in school grades)

Regards from Finland,
Akecu : P

Hi Akecu,
Good to hear that someone is willing to watch it ^^
You should be happy to know even a little bit of swedish,
I'm a "half breed", 50% swedish, 50% Finnish, and i can't even speak a tiny bit of Finnish xD., Well i can say "Moi" and "kiittää" xD
But it's always good to try increase your skill

We will maybe start sub it next week!

[failboat]

I could contribute to the project, if you need it. Im just a kid, but my knowledge of the swedish language is above average. And i got spare time.


Alot of spare time..

[godofcheese]

I could contribute to the project, if you need it. Im just a kid, but my knowledge of the swedish language is above average. And i got spare time.


Alot of spare time..

Hm, as?, translator?
i don't think we need more translators, but i would be good to have one extra, but i can't guarantee you getting any work, at the start atleast.
But maybe later on, But when we have 2 translators we could work with several episodes Simultaneously..
So i guess it will be alright.. but again.. can't guarantee you getting work at the start

[failboat]

Hm, as?, translator?
i don't think we need more translators, but i would be good to have one extra, but i can't guarantee you getting any work, at the start atleast.
But maybe later on, But when we have 2 translators we could work with several episodes Simultaneously..
So i guess it will be alright.. but again.. can't guarantee you getting work at the start

Well, im not asking for work in particular, im more rather volunteering as help if its needed. :3

[stream]

I shall contribute by watching your subbed episode and also train my sweden.
Can't help since my sweden is awful (8 in school grades)

Regards from Finland,
Akecu : P

Hi Akecu,
Good to hear that someone is willing to watch it ^^
You should be happy to know even a little bit of swedish,
I'm a "half breed", 50% swedish, 50% Finnish, and i can't even speak a tiny bit of Finnish xD., Well i can say "Moi" and "kiittää" xD
But it's always good to try increase your skill

We will maybe start sub it next week!

lol you're a 50% Swe/Fin too, I didn't know that.

[1000mAh]

I shall contribute by watching your subbed episode and also train my sweden.
Can't help since my sweden is awful (8 in school grades)

Regards from Finland,
Akecu : P

darn you are good... my swedish grade in school is 6...
reason why I'm willing to watch angel beats with swe. subs  
well it is going to train my swedish... I'm not going to watch the serie before, and I will start watching it when godofcheese & the Co. will get the first ep subbed.

[godofcheese]

Hm, as?, translator?
i don't think we need more translators, but i would be good to have one extra, but i can't guarantee you getting any work, at the start atleast.
But maybe later on, But when we have 2 translators we could work with several episodes Simultaneously..
So i guess it will be alright.. but again.. can't guarantee you getting work at the start

Well, im not asking for work in particular, im more rather volunteering as help if its needed. :3

Ah i see!
Well then , i will bookmark you in "volunteer list", and I will inform you later about work, sounds good?

[failboat]

Ah i see!
Well then , i will bookmark you in "volunteer list", and I will inform you later about work, sounds good?

Sounds perfect.

[1000mAh]

I allow myself to ask that:

när är första episod färdig?

and as you can see my swedish sucks  can't remember that do I need ''en'' or that if I use the ''en should I put it like ''en första'' and then did I use the word ''färdig'' in right place hope you understand I add also in english:

when is the first episode ready?