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Wow, ur good at that too.
One comment only and one recommendation.
Comment : The guy's face. I dunno, it looks kinda ...weird .... I think his eye-nose-face proportions are a lil bit out.
Recommendation : Try cleaning out ur borders by going over it again.
As for shading, u really did a good job. The girl drawn very good. Really like it ^^
Btw is this from Angel Beats?