lines are far too thick, it's pretty distracting. the shading's great though. and TBH, i can't tell whether that's a girl or a boy.
was it really that hard to make that with graphite?(by graphite, do you mean regular pencil?)
it's a shame for a graphics and media/fine arts student, but i don't know much about the tools of the trade ;_;
comments and crits for the poster, BTW.