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harpy:
I have to learn the opposite. I tend to make half page/page long sentences. That is in my writing not on forums. Teachers and so on tell me that it is kind of hard to follow the full sentence. I wonder why? It is clear as day, one just need to remember the beginning and the parts of it that explains the beginning and some that explain explanation and given examples to make it all even more clear and then just put it all together. I do not see it as my fault that they can not follow course of idea untangling during the sentence. I have a problem of putting "." in the middle of idea, I just keep on going till the idea is explained and then I put "."  ;D
I was forced to use other people that would read what I have written and put "." instead of "," ":" and ";"  :'(

Meomix:

--- Quote from: harpy on October 21, 2010, 11:16:22 AM ---I have to learn the opposite. I tend to make half page/page long sentences. That is in my writing not on forums. Teachers and so on tell me that it is kind of hard to follow the full sentence. I wonder why? It is clear as day, one just need to remember the beginning and the parts of it that explains the beginning and some that explain explanation and given examples to make it all even more clear and then just put it all together. I do not see it as my fault that they can not follow course of idea untangling during the sentence. I have a problem of putting "." in the middle of idea, I just keep on going till the idea is explained and then I put "."  ;D
I was forced to use other people that would read what I have written and put "." instead of "," ":" and ";"  :'(

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Screw her, dude.

Screw her dude.

It all disappeared in that moment. She ran away.

It all disappeared, in that moment she ran away.

KoC:
An elegant demonstration.

Soulreaper77:
I tend to use too much ","'s in my sentences xD Also I use the word "also" too much (see beginning of this sentence) or too much of side-explanations in "( )"
In real life I put too much space between the words and too unevenly distributed. People  tend  to    find  that really  annoying.   

JoonasTo:
Nice one.
Tell me, when did philosophers need to know how to write?
Speaking a few wise words. Then pausing...makes a better impression...


Since it's KoC I just have to post this here. A classic in finnish.

Armoa ei, Siperiaan.
Armoa, ei Siperiaan.

Mercy no, to Syberia.
Mercy, no to Syberia.

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