Author Topic: Lets converse in poem (Read 6590 times)

Soryon · « **on:** April 11, 2011, 03:39:48 AM »

Here I am
Making a new thread this time
Ill edit this later
but for now lets rhyme!

haikus can take a hike, this is about rhyming!

Kyrdua · « **Reply #1 on:** April 12, 2011, 01:18:35 AM »

wow, this thread's new
this is really, a dream come true!
it's a great test of my rhyming skills too!
i like this dude, how bout you?

froody1911 · « **Reply #2 on:** April 12, 2011, 07:00:31 AM »

w00t w00t! This thread is THE shit!
Get ready to be assaulted with wit.
Now we don't need the Words thread
(Which, by the way, is already dead).

We could have a gangsta rap battle,
Yo Kyrdua, let's hear you rattle.

Kyrdua · « **Reply #3 on:** April 12, 2011, 09:18:22 AM »

good god, bro, you're off a good start!
other threads can eat shit and drown in my fart!
lshow peeps in the house how words makes art!
come on froody, do your part!

TiYlER · « **Reply #4 on:** April 12, 2011, 07:56:33 PM »

wow you guys are good
i could never be like that
wow you guys are hood
perhaps i should scat

get out of here i should
before they get their bat
but if only i could
ive been held captive by their cat

froody1911 · « **Reply #5 on:** April 13, 2011, 02:47:18 AM »

I'm back, gonna drop some lines
Tyler, you're one that undermines
Their own potential. This confines
You to the mediocre. What defines
A poet, is not his flow of words
But his emotions, that like birds
Fly free through the sky of creativity.
So enhance your rhyming proclivity,
And breed in your words, captivity.

BrownMasterV · « **Reply #6 on:** April 13, 2011, 02:55:27 AM »

Don't go spouting all that shit
about how Tyler should just quit,
you don't need no skill to rhyme
hell, I do it all the time
Now in words there may be power,
One creates a lyrical tower,
But when my words fall like a shower,
From my prose and rhyme you'll cower.

Kyrdua · « **Reply #7 on:** April 13, 2011, 03:06:59 AM »

*beatboxes*

yo yo, what the hell is this shit?
why don't you let the kid quit?
shawty needs training
for his passion ain't flaming

gotta hone your rhymes
to keep up with the times
or you end up losing face
in the ghetto of this place.

froody1911 · « **Reply #8 on:** April 13, 2011, 03:34:37 AM »

BrownMasterV,
Homedog, you see,
You need to read that shit once more.

I don't want him to quit,
Imma inspire dat shit.
The kid can do much better for sure.

As for your lyrical tower
Bitch, that ain't no shower.
More like a drizzle
Your swag's all fizzle.

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Kyrdua · « **Reply #9 on:** April 13, 2011, 03:40:10 AM »

yo, yo what's this talk about -- a tower?
when all you gotta do is -- fight the power?
it really helps you -- in a lonely hour
especially when you -- have no flower
cower
Imma show you rhymes that -- burn like fire!

froody1911 · « **Reply #10 on:** April 13, 2011, 03:55:00 AM »

"Fire" don't rhyme with none of that shit
Fetch some weed and take a hit.
Now listen up, you worthless two-bit
Write your rhymes with a little more grit
That just ain't how an MC spit.

Kyrdua · « **Reply #11 on:** April 13, 2011, 04:38:55 AM »

dude, is that a protip?
that's something i'd say in an acid trip.
if you call that hood i call that shit
sure it don't rhyme but i'd say it's hit

BrownMasterV · « **Reply #12 on:** April 13, 2011, 04:52:26 AM »

Now why are we talking like hip-hop rappers?
It seems so generic I want to throw it down the crapper
Now you see, rhyming doesn't need to have "swag"
So here's to proper grammar, let's raise a white flag.

Ketsueki · « **Reply #13 on:** April 13, 2011, 09:43:17 PM »

This is love in slow motion.
I write this to show my devotion.

With you gone from my side,
I'll have an ever wandering mind.
Share with me the secrets you kept inside,
Because overtime you'll want to confide.

Take my hand and runaway.
Life will be boring if we stay.
Run with me for eternity,
For you are my clarity.

All the thing's we say just seem so right.
I'm the one who holds you at night.
I'll hold you close to me,
I don't want that feeling to be a memory.

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P.S. Now get chippa.

Kyrdua · « **Reply #14 on:** April 13, 2011, 10:46:06 PM »

dude, i don't think that's a rhyme
you in the wrong thread in the wrong time?

maybe, but that really looks like a song
for this thread that's considered wrong

not that it matters to me
so i'll shut up and let it be.

TiYlER · « **Reply #15 on:** April 13, 2011, 11:04:43 PM »

remember the time,
when froody said kyrdua couldn't rhyme,
tower, power, hour, flower and cower
with "burn like fire!"?

well, im here to tell you,
froody is here to mislead
while the rhyme isn't "true",
rhyme he did indeed

there is a rhyme called "slant"
if star wants to rhyme with heart, it can
(see what I did there man?)

just depends on how you say it
in fact, most songs in the US,
have to use this skit
there are just not enough,
words to rhyme wit

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BrownMasterV · « **Reply #16 on:** April 14, 2011, 01:25:28 AM »

Good job there Ketsueki
I see you've found the key.
Let's throw away this crap,
Let's rhyme without rap
All this rap is just lame
You shall not achieve fame,
but sophisticated rhyming is the name of the game

Ketsueki · « **Reply #17 on:** April 14, 2011, 02:40:19 AM »

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Throw away all your keys,
Cause battlin you is a breeze.
Just fall to your knees.
Beg me and say please.

I won't believe.
You'll just have to appease me.
But you have a disease.

So I'll squeeze, tease, squash it.
You'll just have to forfeit,
Before you split.

So you might as well,
Commit, submit, admit
To your disease. B*tch!

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froody1911 · « **Reply #18 on:** April 14, 2011, 02:41:58 AM »

@BrownMasterV
Whatever floats your boat I suppose
I'll stow away the rap
But you're trying too hard to impose
Your view that rap is crap.

You think what you're doing
is sophisticated rhyming
I certainly don't agree
If sophistication you want
How about you flaunt
A little more imagery?

@Tyler
Indeed I know of the slant
But really, you just can't
Rhyme something like "our" with "fire"
No matter how hard you aspire
There is no way to say it
That will adequately fit.

Kyrdua · « **Reply #19 on:** April 14, 2011, 02:45:19 AM »

come on yo, to each their own
truth has already been shown
by TiYlER from the flesh to the bone

imma tell you though, rap is a man's soul
it burns with vigor like fire from black coal
for it's necessary to fulfill one's role
on sex and drugs and rock and roll.