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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #20 on: June 25, 2011, 03:04:59 PM »
just upped a new chapter, if anyone is still reading this.

where? wanna read it. nvm saw your website.
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« Reply #21 on: July 04, 2011, 05:10:57 PM »
chapter 4 :http://oddlypopulated.blogspot.com/2011/07/part-four-looking-back.html

if anyone still cares.

someone actually sent me fan art last week. i was pretty excited.

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #22 on: July 04, 2011, 10:02:01 PM »
I have something written on these forums. It was based on a dream I had and I wrote about it. Too lazy to link it at the moment though.
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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #23 on: July 21, 2011, 03:24:58 PM »

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #24 on: July 21, 2011, 03:53:34 PM »
heres a little story, inspired by reading lores on league of legends, sorry for the bad grammar though. point out the corrections if you want.
and yea, i suck at fixing the arrangements, i just type here and there.

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-Tier1-

In the far outskirts of Ionia his father would always teach him martial arts for self defense,
Connan living a life where he couldn't even meet his mother and knowing that the outer world was dangerous.
Connan was bullied by other children around his village, but his father's teaching got him better "always treat people equally,
be it foe or friend, thats the way of the martial arts." he wouldn't "hurt" the bullies,
he'd just think of it as playing while practicing self defense on them, literally.
Parents would always nag on Connan's father about their children getting bruises all over while ignoring how Connan were covered in bandages.
his father was cunning to talk the parents out and soon after scolds Connan for "playing" with the children on their village "Try and play with them without leaving any injuries ok?",
he knew Connan was getting bullied but still thought him not to pick a bone with anyone and not to hold grudge.
but Connan's father befall a strange illness, the village's doctor wasnt able to distinguish what the illness is,
soon after a month his father leaves a dying message for Connan

--"Don't cry my son, you have far more to accomplish than what i`ve thought you,
you have potential, Live and enjoy your life but remember not to injure your "friends" while playing ok?
promise me to live a life of challenge and enjoyment, not to bully people, remember "always treat people equally, be it foe or friend,
thats the way of the martial arts." and stick to your beliefs. so this is good-bye, i`m going to go see how mom is doing..."--

Connan couldn't believe his strong cunning father died just like that and cried all night.

-Tier2-

Hearing that the famous Martial Artist died, thieves went inside the house knowing that there's valuable trophies in there but Connan wouldn't give fathers possession without a nice "playing",
bruises fell before the thieves but their number was far too great for one child to handle, they knocked Connan unconscious and sold him into a slave trader.
days after, he was being transported into the main city for the sale of the slaves but a bounty hunter intercepted the caravan and seizing the slave trader for his bounty while releasing the slaves,
Connan though, followed the bounty hunter, instincts tells him that hes a good guy, the bounty hunter already noticed him but ignored, two days later Connan collapses of starvation,
the bounty hunter picked him up and gave him bread and water and asked "Why were you following me boy? you do know that i`m not interested in taking care of slaves",
Connan answers "I don't have anywhere else to go, my house has been robbed empty, my parents are gone, i`m all alone. what is your name?" the bounty hunter replied "you don't have to know, just call me mister.".
noticing he knew basic martial arts, the bounty hunter thought him a few things, he said that he could be his apprentice but not for free, he`ll be his gopher.
at day, Connan worked as the bounty hunter's gopher and went on errands for him. at night Connan would train and continue his father's martial arts teaching, but it was incomplete,
he practiced every night to find out what the martial art can do but instead ended up creating his own way of martial arts, night after night he`d train and master his new fond martial art.
the bounty hunter observes him train and notices that he had the potential to complete the weird martial art "hah! the child came up with such a weird dance". the next night Connan was in a deep trance,
thinking what to do after he hit a wall on his martial art "Hey kid, why'd you stop?" the bounty hunter interrupted "Come on try it on me", Connan snapped from his trance and accepted the challenge,
regrettably he loses but "Oi, you trying to kill me?" Connan didn't know his techniques was that dangerous, if the bounty hunter wasn't skilled, he would've ended up killing him "Learn how to control, that's what you're lacking now".

-Tier3-

News spread all over Ionia that there's a pair of bounty hunter swooping every bounty around the board "Are you seriously saying an average bounty hunter accompanied by ten year old is getting the credit?"
townsfolk have been arguing about it "Its not the bounty hunter that you should be amazed, its the kid, the kid i tell you, everyone of them villains lay unconscious when they arrive on the sheriff's office without a scratch!
weird enough is that the kid uses some weird style that doesn't injure a person, just instantly knocks them to sleep.". The League heard about the rumors and became interested with Connan, "Oi kid,
looks like we`ll have to depart this time, a messenger came and is waiting for you outside, saying this so called "League" is scouting you", Connan in surprise accepts and thanks the bounty hunter for his care for the past few months,
a parting gift was received before Connan left the town, a black belt "you're a strong kid, but you're still growing.".

-Tier4-

"Hello sir, this is your message, and this is your ticket, don't lose them both" says the skinny tall man, bearing the cloak of a messenger "the so called League is in search for you, they ask if you'd accept to participate"

Connan, in excitement asks "Thank you, but how would i go into the League? i take it that it is far, right?"

"not at all, it's about a month of travel, and a good journey." "worry not, i`m the one that will escort you there."

"Really? i thank you in advance.".

Arriving at the Port of Ionia. a large man in his mid fifties, white in hair and full of scars walks towards Connan's group "Hello there matees!", "i take it you're heading to the mainland?"

the messenger, in anticipation, replied "Yes sir, are you by any chance, vacant? will you be able to host our voyage into the noxus territory?"

"why of course, no brute, nor barbarian can scare this old sailor out of commission." they walk towards the dock, seeing an array of boat in stall.

"here we are, all aboard!"

"wow, what a big ship!" Connan in surprise and excitement, stepped onto the ramp.

"Not that ship me son, the other one behind you"

"..." Connan came back down the ramp and stopped in front of the sailor's ship. "what a party pooper." the ship was no larger than an average house, but no smaller than your biggest sail.

-Tier5-

After departing the Dock, Connan spectates the deck in fascination "First time seeing the sea, sir?" the messenger asks.

"yes, but i`ve seen lakes, and i heard from father that the ocean is much bigger than they are but still, it's a surprise to see it this big..."

"hmmm, quite true, compared to rivers and lakes, the ocean is far bigger than what they are. just like comparing a puddle to a pond."

"what is the league supposed to be, mr. umm?"

"call me Lorenz" Lorenz continues "have you heard of the Rune War?"

"no, what is it?"

"would you like to hear the story?"

"sure."

"Alright then. Until only twenty years ago, Runeterra was on a collision course with disaster. As quickly as Runeterra denizens would band together in ancient times as tribes, opposing tribes would war to settle their disputes. No matter the era, the preferred choice of warfare has always been magical. Armies would be enhanced or decimated by spell and rune alike. Champions made the most of magical items forged for them as they led or supported armies. Summoners often the de facto leaders of Valoran political forces would unleash mighty magical powers directly against foes and their holdings with little regard for consequence. With such an abundance of raw magical power at their disposal, there was little motivation for summoners to explore more environmentally-friendly forms of warfare. Within the last two hundred years, however, the dangers of unchecked magical warfare began to expose the fragility of Runeterra to everyone residing in Valoran."

"i don't get it, so the Runeterra people would rage war against their kind for power?"

"Not entirely, but let me finish." Lorenz continues "The last two Rune Wars drastically altered the geophysical landscape of Valoran, even after magical energy was focused on restoring it. Violent earthquakes and horrific magically-fueled storms made life on Valoran challenging, even before factoring in the horror of warfare on the populace. It was theorized that another unchecked Rune War would tear the world asunder. As a direct response to the world growing physical and political instability, Valoran key magicians including many powerful summoners came to the conclusion that conflicts needed to be resolved in a controllable and systemic way. They formed an organization called the League of Legends, whose purpose was to oversee the orderly resolution of political conflict in Valoran. Housed in the Institute of War, The League resolved that all major political conflict would be settled through the use of specially prepared arenas strategically located throughout Valoran. Summoners representing a particular political allegiance would each call forth a champion; he most common victory condition of a battle arena would be to destroy the opposing faction nexus. While all major political conflicts were being funneled through the League of Legends, physical conflicts between warring political entities were not completely eliminated. Even still, all political entities abide by the governance of the League of Legends. No wise regent would be foolish enough to rail against a vast cabal of immensely powerful magicians, summoners, and champions."

"ohh..." Connan stares far out into the sea.

"Let's get inside, the sun is about to set." they walked slowly towards the cabin doors.

Connan looks back for another look just before entering the wooden door "so beautiful" a beautiful golden red sky and a body of water stretches across in sight.

Map of Valoran Continent

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10days have passed by sail and 14days have passed by caravan, finally reaching the destination, the institute of war.

-Tier6-

Institute of War

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"Halt, what brings you here young traveler." a fully armored guard asks "I received a letter and a scouting from the League of Legends, requesting for my audience." Connan replied "Proceed little one" the guard accepts.

the vast hallway was empty, no presence could be felt, his footsteps ripples on the marble floor, echoing through the hallway. slowly striding through the hallway, cautious, more like paranoid, the emptiness of the hall was weird. A figure emerged from the darkness "This way young one, this way." an old man in figure but a strong presence lingers around him, thinking he felt no presence at all before he saw the old man, he's no ordinary old man.

They stopped, in front of them was a massive marble door, it was like a relic of an empire, old but stood formidable. Connan touches the door and pushes it, it opens slowly, only darkness could be seen through the gaps of the door,"It's dark", the old man grins "Yes it is", the door finally opened, the atmosphere felt eerie, so much as if the air itself was dead, cold and empty "Old man, are you coming too?" attempting look at the old man for he felt his presence vanished, he turns around but the door was not there, it was all black, darkness was only to be seen but he kept looking around.

-Tier7-

he hears a creaking sound, snaps out of his trance "what, wait, my house?" in the mids of confusion, the front door continues to creek open and a black figure appears "who are you?! what do you want?!" the figure walks in wary but steady and calm as if the house was empty, finally reaching the wooden cabinet "No! don't open that!" Connan rushes towards the black figure to try and stop him, but the instant he touched him, everything turned black.

a voice ripples into the silence and echoes into his ears "the League eh?", "are you sure you want to join the League?", "weak! you don't deserve to get into the League!". noices echoes through his ears as he grins his teeth, clenching his fists "Shut up!", "I don't want to hear your stupid mockery", "No more!" rage engulfed his mind and heart but one voice reached him. "Concentrate Connan, concentrate, this is just an illusion, you know better how hard i thought you." recognizing the voice, shivers befall Connan and his hair stood on end, tears falls down his cheek as he opens his mouth "Father?", "Concentrate Connan.", "but where are you father? i want to see you!", "Calm your self my son, Concentrate, follow your energy and channel it to your center." Connan closes his eyes and stood still, silence befall the darkness instantly as he could hear his own heart and breath from within, channeling his energy amplified his senses, pulses of energy seeped through his body, gathering into his center. "Release" Connan unleashed a shockwave of light and energy, the darkness retreats and cowers as if a superior being looms near.

-Tier8-

"greetings my son", "father?!" The admirable figure walks towards Connan, with a nice smile as if proud of something, he opens his mouth "Why do you want to join the League, Connan?", "huh what? father? uh... it's because i don't have anywhere else to go...", "Why do you want to join the League, Connan?","to sharpen my skills and master the martial arts you thought me" the nice smile fades as he nears "Why do you want to join the League, Connan?" irritated "To surpass you and find a rival!" he stops right in front of Connan, and placed his hand on his son's shoulder with a grim, disappointed expression "Why do you want to join the League, Connan?", Connan loses focus, time felt like it was still, every word was echoing inside his head then he freezes, cold sweat started falling down his cheek, he opens his mouth "Vengeance... No, punishment for myself." the expression brightens, a soft smile can be witnessed. "for what?", "I`ve hurt alot of people, i repent... i`m sorry.", a wide smile cleaves through the figure's face, tears forms on his eyes "How does it feel, exposing your mind?", "Relieved, thank you, father..."

the door behind him creeks open, in surprise he turns his head, peeked and saw a brighten hall, he turns back, the figure he always admired was gone, only the empty hall he took stretches across is left to be seen. "This way young one, this way." Connan snaps from is trance, the old man grins and lead the way "huh? what? was that a dream?" the old man turns and walks through the door "..." Connan follows "wow...".
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question, how do you use word wrap in the code box?

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #25 on: July 21, 2011, 04:04:46 PM »
yay! someone other than me posted something!

will take a look at it while flying tomorrow and respond (prolly a pm?) to you with some feedback.

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #26 on: July 21, 2011, 04:11:23 PM »
actually i got two stories in progress, that one seems to be enough to close the first book and issue a continuation later on. the other is still like a rough draft, pure thoughts and no connection to each other, gonna connect them later if it has enough ideas in it. want me to post it?

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« Reply #27 on: July 21, 2011, 04:13:28 PM »
s'up to you. it may take a while to get to both. i leave for Kyoto tomorrow and the next week+ is a little crazy. whatever you post i will take a look at though.

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #28 on: July 21, 2011, 04:22:19 PM »
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Ironworks Castle - Cityhall in the mainland of Felmorel.
King Westler G(George). Victor the Sixth - Current King of Felmorel.
King Revearth T(Tristan). Jonas the third - Current king of Zian.
Archbishop Seigh - Hidden arm of the King, keeper of the forbidden Library.
Forbidden Library - here lies thousands of mankind's hystories that are bound by taboos.
Fallen - a race of a different world that evolved from a dying world, Reverent.
Hiarch - a dweller of a different world that aided the people of Sigal.
Sigal - 5th planet of the Io Star system, has 8 countries. 14months and 28days a month.
Io Star system - it is a star system with 15 planets.
Archon - is the 2nd planet of star millen, it has 4months and 2016hrs a month, day and night lasts 1008hrs as the planet can only do 4 full rotations each year.
Reverent - is the 1st planet of Star Narad, it is the home planet of The Fallen.
Triad Star system - it is a star system with 3Stars and 6planets. it is a multiple star system that are near each other.
Voral - 1st star of Triad star system
Millen - 2nd star of Triad Star system
Narad - 3rd star of Triad star system

Deloress - Center South country of Planet Sigal
Dile - Mainland of Deloress

Felmorel - Center North country of Planet Sigal
Nille - Mainland of Felmorel

Zian - South East Country of Planet Sigal
Pertual - Mainland of Zian


-prologue : Meeting-

Year 659 14th, 28, Nille, Mainland of Felmorel, a stormy night just as the clocktower of the city hall strikes 12:00 mn, echoing through out the city, a world summoning is being held in the Mainland's city hall, also known as the Ironworks Castle.
"Greetings Fellow people, as you may have heard, there has been a crysis in our world, unknown beings spawns all over the world as we speak, we do not know where they are from, but we do know that most of them are dangerous enough to be left roaming
around" King Westler spoke, "your highness, do we have to evacuate the southern Nille? there have been too many of these "things" sighted, we do not have much casualties yet but the public is getting too agitated over the growing numbers of them"
Spoke the governor of Xille, "We do not need to evacuate the cities yet, i`m declaring martial law over the country to keep the public safe, additional rules would be to stay away from those even in the morning, any people sighted past beyond 10pm
is to be confined in the City Jail" spoke the King, "Your Highness, can we plea for assistance on our country Zian? almost half of our country is flooded with these "things", we already evacuated our Mainland and two major cities" King Revearth spoke,
"I can take refuge over the northern Nille, there have been no sights of those "things" so far" King Westler spoke, "please refrain from calling it 'things','these'or'them', their race do have a name, they're called Fallen, more like phantoms if you
compare them on child's stories, they have been written in history deep inside the forbidden library. here, your highness, let me read the contents for you" said the archbishop Seigh

"Year 248 12th, 22, these things have started appearing, they were sinister and a mysterious aura surrounds them, we witnessed one of their summonings, they were some kind of beings that are from another world, passing through a dark void that opens
on places, anything they touch seems to rot and wither. Year 248 14th, 24, the whole country is flooded with the creatures, we were forced to take refuge inside the IronWorks Castle. a new being emerged and started fighting off the creatures, they
introduced them selves as the Hiarch dwellers 'forgive us for arriving late, we are the Hiarch, fear not for we come to help and aid you on your stand' they explained the situation to us 'these beings are no ordinary creatures, they are the Fallen race of a dark planet, this
planet has died along time ago, but a phenomena happened, few beings emerged and started to form, they released a sinister aura vast enough to alarm our world, they formed from the decaying life of the planet's vengeance, phantoms if you call it. we
do not know their purpose but we have to stop them' they also mentioned that it is not only our country who is suffering from the Fallen's invasion, the whole world is-"

archbishop Seigh continues "my apologise your highness, but the scroll is torn and the rest of the documents are missing." Archbishop Seigh said "Worry not, you did what you could, the information is enough, but the way on how to defeat those so called
Fallen it are missing, if we could just contact these so called Hiarch race." King Westler said.


-Act1 : Awakening-

Year 650 2nd, 04, Two months have passed since the start of the invasion. Southern Nille, "everyone please remain calm, we are evacuating the city, as of this moment, please gather your belongings and head to the destined pick up site, please refrain
from bringing anything unnecessary" military propaganda announced "any injured will be treated in the medical camp". 15minutes later, "i got to hurry home and help mom pack the stuffs"

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the clan, or to be precise, the Ninetails clan, was a well known powerful clan that uses the flame element but there's a little problem to their clan, the members of their clan is only a handful, the reason for this is the absolute rule "no one is permitted to cross blood with any race other than the fox race" still, loving another race is allowed, but having children is forbidden, it was a rule to maintain the pure bloods.

the founder of the clan was the most powerful ever walked on our planet, she was the only nine tailed fox which contributed to our current peaceful society until the fifth generation, the second Ninetail was born into the clan, her name was Trisha Ninetails.

at a young age of 9 she already surpassed the founder in both power and abilities, the most surprise was her ability to use other element other than the flame, she could adapt and use the wind, the earth and the water for which is a first in history, no being has ever managed to control more than two elements, the current user that has managed to learn two elements is the current emperor, he has mastered both the lightning element and the wind element.

until Trisha fell in love with a man from your world that came with us after the fight 400 years ago to learn our ways of living, at first it was not disturbing, even the townsfolk knew their affair but in just a single night the Ninetails clan went into an uproar, the man broke the taboo and mated with Trisha, the issue was not known until the child was born, a bloody trial started after that and lasted for 2years.

Their elders was not too cruel as they've thought, the elders gave them a last hope, be it a wish or a request, it decided the outcome of today's standing. their request was to spare the child and take their lives instead, the elders took argument over the request and came to a conclusion for it "the child is spared if there will be a godfather to volunteer, as for the punishment for the parents, the father will be executed as he has broken the absolute taboo, but the mother shall be spared on one condition, she shall be imprisoned in the spirits vault and be serving for the world council for the rest of her life and she is forbidden to see her daughter unless if necessary".

before the punishment was settled, they gave them a chance to name the child, of course it was the parent's joy to name a child, they settled on the name Natasha Ninetails but no one volunteered to take care of the child, it was problematic for the council as it contradicts with the last request, then that's where i took her and became a godfather but additionally i proposed the soul container, it is a spell which seals the soul and let it substitute for a body's soul.

the preparations of the container took 10years to complete and Natasha knew what its supposed to be and who's it for, containing Natasha's soul was easy but this spell was in it's early stages so it took 100years to even manage to settle the seal on the container and another troublesome part, no suitable body was available on that day, 300years passed then i saw a ray of hope, your original child was born missing a soul, or dead in your terms, i don't know if you were grateful but i apologize for this.
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well then i`d post it here, might get some more ideas from people's comments.
this was entirely my imagination, i dont know what influenced me but meh, i pretty much think its original.
and again, sorry for the bad grammar, this time its seriously bad because its just a compilation of ideas with a few connections.

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #29 on: July 21, 2011, 04:57:36 PM »
my more current stuff is on my site: http://oddlypopulated.blogspot.com/
the novel is a little, uh, long. and needs MASSIVE fixes.

i am actually surprised that there is that much interest in poetry. i would never have thought to try something like an epic poem...curious.

TiYler, if you post stuff i will try to give some feedback.

Hmmm.

I'm kinda interested. I may go and have a look, possibly read the novel, despite not really liking to read novels on-line.
I prefer to have a book in my hands when I'm reading a story.
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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #30 on: July 22, 2011, 01:54:04 AM »
my more current stuff is on my site: http://oddlypopulated.blogspot.com/
the novel is a little, uh, long. and needs MASSIVE fixes.

i am actually surprised that there is that much interest in poetry. i would never have thought to try something like an epic poem...curious.

TiYler, if you post stuff i will try to give some feedback.

Hmmm.

I'm kinda interested. I may go and have a look, possibly read the novel, despite not really liking to read novels on-line.
I prefer to have a book in my hands when I'm reading a story.

you can only guess how much i wish i had a hard copy to direct you towards. baby steps...

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #31 on: July 22, 2011, 06:42:20 AM »
my more current stuff is on my site: http://oddlypopulated.blogspot.com/
the novel is a little, uh, long. and needs MASSIVE fixes.

i am actually surprised that there is that much interest in poetry. i would never have thought to try something like an epic poem...curious.

TiYler, if you post stuff i will try to give some feedback.

Hmmm.

I'm kinda interested. I may go and have a look, possibly read the novel, despite not really liking to read novels on-line.
I prefer to have a book in my hands when I'm reading a story.

you can only guess how much i wish i had a hard copy to direct you towards. baby steps...

Well, I've just printed it all out, so I do have a 'hard copy' of it, not quite a book, but better than reading it off of a screen.

15 A4 pages isn't too bad.

Don't worry about it being too long, look at LoTR for goodness sake.

Also, I own almost every "Disc World" (by Terry Pratchett) novel there is and those average between 380-400 odd pages a book.

Edit: I read what you have so far and..... there had better be more where that came from.

Not too many spelling mistakes, just the odd one or two.
It's obvious that you have done some research on the various temples and such like, the descriptions read pretty well and match up pretty closely with what I have seen in various anime I have watched.

Love the background stories of Ezra and Yun and the fact that not all of Ezra's encounters are violent.

Keep going the way you are and I reckon you could have you could have yourself a pretty good book.

Also, time sort of 'vanished' while I was reading your novel and that is a good sign as far as I am concerned, it means I was enjoying myself and that is a big thing.
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« Reply #32 on: July 29, 2011, 02:01:21 PM »
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thanks for the encouragement!

yeah, there is more, including "back chapters" that will fill in some more of Ezra and Yun's backgrounds.

it's funny, i actually just went to the Inari shrine two days ago and found i need to change a few things. hehe, oops! But it does help having done quite a bit of research on religion.

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« Reply #33 on: August 11, 2011, 04:11:14 PM »
I write fanfiction too, though my fandom is HellBoy(movie verse) and not pertaining to the anime world. Used to write original prose, some stuff got published (nothing major, really), but somehow couldn't get in touch with my muse anymore. My current one likes Prince Nuada only *sigh*

So yeah, I'm up for chatting with other writers, particularly if you have a fanfiction.net account, cause I'm there more often.

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« Reply #34 on: August 16, 2011, 11:30:44 PM »
I have none at the moment, but i like poems. when bored i can create masterpieces that can only be described as "lolwat".
complete with bad grammar and gratuitous use of difficult sounding words.

EDIT: so who wants a fanfic contest for bonus points in the tracker?

I'm up for it. I'm currently working on the third story for my zombie apocalypse novel. Twill be EPIC!

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #35 on: August 17, 2011, 05:30:17 AM »
I don't write, but I read a lot on FF.net


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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #36 on: August 17, 2011, 07:24:45 AM »
so wassup?

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #37 on: September 11, 2011, 10:32:16 PM »
wow, long delay. new chapter for those interested: http://oddlypopulated.blogspot.com/2011/09/part-six-reclining-buddha.html

as for the fanfic competition, it sounds like it could be fun. seeing if mods/admins would be willing to award bonus points sounds like a good idea. we would need a few more judges though. i could do it, but i wouldn't want to be the only one. then give everyone a month to write, polish and submit?

any thoughts?

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #38 on: September 11, 2011, 10:44:52 PM »
wow, long delay. new chapter for those interested: http://oddlypopulated.blogspot.com/2011/09/part-six-reclining-buddha.html

as for the fanfic competition, it sounds like it could be fun. seeing if mods/admins would be willing to award bonus points sounds like a good idea. we would need a few more judges though. i could do it, but i wouldn't want to be the only one. then give everyone a month to write, polish and submit?

any thoughts?

I've decided that I will read your entire book. Though I get sidetracked easily, so i'm going to save the text in a file and store it for later consumption.
As for the contest, i'm game! Since it's just fanfic, I don't need to go through the long process of creating characters... GOD that took forever in Creative Writing class. I think I'm going to start writing mine now so i can get a head start. :3

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Re: Original/Fan Lit
« Reply #39 on: September 11, 2011, 11:12:53 PM »
Ah, I have several unfinished works. From dozens of poems, to incomplete memoirs and dropped novels. I'd be glad to post them for people to enjoy instead of rotting under my bed. (Though be warned, I write my mind.) Will get around to posting them eventually. Could I see some of your work, E? Oh, and I believe Antheon is writing a series.

I would like to see yours if you would be so kind to post it.