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Krudda · « **Reply #240 on:** **Yesterday** at 03:16:24 AM »

Two characters, one ample, one average. Tadah! Zero extra work for the artist. No?

juggalojohn · « **Reply #241 on:** **Yesterday** at 03:43:20 AM »

it kinda need to be short.more LIs we add more we have to wright.

Krudda · « **Reply #242 on:** **Yesterday** at 03:49:52 AM »

I don't get it, its not an option for bust size, I was saying you need at least two characters anyway. Make one of each. Not every character has to be busty.

juggalojohn · « **Reply #243 on:** **Yesterday** at 04:03:09 AM »

IIRC the story has two LIs

Tiffanys · « **Reply #244 on:** **Yesterday** at 04:18:26 AM »

The baseball one? One girl, one boy love interest. We could have a visible protagonist, she has a little bit smaller breasts than the female love interest but I wouldn't call them small.

Probably something like this:

Bob2004 · « **Reply #245 on:** **Yesterday** at 10:42:59 AM »

Quote from: Tiffanys on Yesterday at 01:02:42 AM

Quote from: Bob2004 on November 12, 2014, 11:14:41 PM
Quote from: juggalojohn on November 12, 2014, 10:50:55 PM
might as well go for the widest demographic. hopefully the next game has other sizes

I'd have thought the widest demographic would be for something vaguely resembling human anatomy. Characters as massively deformed as that is a pretty niche fetish.
lol what?

Ahh, I was looking at this one:

Quote from: Tiffanys on November 11, 2014, 02:19:11 AM

Here's something really old that I did, 100% cell shading: nsfw

I didn't notice your second one, which is definitely an improvement. Still looks highly improbable to me tbh, but certainly not nearly as bad as the first one you posted.

Quote from: Krudda on Yesterday at 01:05:03 AM

Bob recently lived in Japan remember. That probably influenced his ideas of human anatomy.

Of course, if there's an actual picture he's speaking about, I missed it.

And I grew up (and live) in the UK. I'm no stranger to women with big breasts, thank you very much.

Tiffanys · « **Reply #246 on:** **Yesterday** at 10:53:54 AM »

Well you can say what you want but I think my anatomy is spot on in both. Anatomy and your preference of breast size or fitness are two different things entirely.

Chiyachan · « **Reply #247 on:** **Yesterday** at 10:57:39 AM »

She's uguuuleee though.

Tiffanys · « **Reply #248 on:** **Yesterday** at 11:11:45 AM »

Yeah, the face on that old one wasn't great. You should see the really old one though... it was terrifying.

(click to show/hide)

...needless to say, I think I improved a bit since.... lol

kitamesume · « **Reply #249 on:** **Yesterday** at 02:14:43 PM »

you didn't just improve lol, you evolved!
no kidding.

brunoais · « **Reply #250 on:** **Yesterday** at 06:01:28 PM »

IMO: Breasts still too big (It's really rare for a human to get breasts that size or more) + Too much makeup (but that's just a personal preference)

Tiffanys · « **Reply #251 on:** **Yesterday** at 06:06:05 PM »

Makeup? What are you talking about...? There's no makeup at all...

Also, you do realize this is anime and not real life.. right? Even flat chested anime girls have something like a B cup and average is probably something like a D.

brunoais · « **Reply #252 on:** **Yesterday** at 07:02:45 PM »

Quote from: Tiffanys on Yesterday at 06:06:05 PM

Also, you do realize this is anime and not real life.. right? Even flat chested anime girls have something like a B cup and average is probably something like a D.

B ain't flat. Usually, the best sizes in jap fiction, IMO, are the girls in non-ecchi (not all, though) and the supporting characters. They are usually drawn without weird proportions.

Just being sincere on how I perceive it...
I think that character's waist to hip is too thin :S. Is that 0.5 ratio? Try 0.7

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Nails with that color... Looks weird and out of place.
Fingers seem too long compared to the hand... Try removing around 5 to 10%.
Human's eye lashes aren't that thick. If you are after eye lashes, use less. If you are after just a line (typical anime) just use a single black line around the eyes.

For all the rest, looks nice! Keep on improving ^^.

Which part of the uncanny valley are you aiming at?

On another note: Weren't we going to do a slice of life? I still don't know well what kind of characters are we after...

Krudda · « **Reply #253 on:** **Yesterday** at 07:17:43 PM »

Don't ask me, I don't even know what story we're using, but if we do pull it off, I'd like to try and make a horror next.

Tiffanys · « **Reply #254 on:** **Yesterday** at 07:37:11 PM »

It's a straight up eroge.

lololitas · « **Reply #255 on:** **Yesterday** at 07:59:02 PM »

According to Juggalajohn it's this one: http://forums.bakabt.me/index.php?topic=42967.msg5041938#msg5041938

I only skimmed over it, but aside from proofreading it didn't look like it'd need fleshing out, not that I started reading it yet. I'll have some time this weekend to get started on actually reading this.

Krudda · « **Reply #256 on:** **Yesterday** at 08:15:57 PM »

But we are 'fleshing it out', or atleast protruding flesh. And its upsetting brunoais

DefyingChick · « **Reply #257 on:** **Yesterday** at 09:26:45 PM »

Uhm... I'd like to help, but I somehow doubt I'll be of any help. Lemme go to bed, and I'll look at te forum tomorrow. Did we have an irc?

On a sidenote, funding could be made by say 3-5 sparedollar donations a month from the diffrient members, if they were needed.

Krudda · « **Reply #258 on:** **Yesterday** at 09:34:53 PM »

We will need voice actors eventually I assume moans and ggrunts and stuff come under sound fx, which at present, I am slated to engineer, plus the more help the better.

Ozzaharwood · « **Reply #259 on:** **Yesterday** at 11:08:14 PM »

Well... I don't think I'd be able to write eroge very well, so you can just put me on as an editor/proofreader for this game. I was expecting something less sex-focused; I have little to no experience writing/reading erotic games or stories. I'll still try to help out where I can, though.